Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

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Five Letter Words

sweet music swing
     gypsy bells cheer
berry wines swoon
     lulls aloft wings 
warm’d honey cache
     slow’d lyric beats
plays fork’d tunes
     sweet music swing

skirt, tango, twirl
     ruddy flame aglow
tests muddy water
     swims under brows
slakes river lusts
     brews vivid scent 
‘round robin crest
     skirt, tango, twirl

12/18/2017
Rhoda Tripp’s Fem Bogstaver Contest

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Line Gauthier May 5, 2018 at 8:47 PM A delightful poem, Kim. Belated congrats on your win. Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2018 at 8:48 PM Thank you, sweet Line!

Gregory Richard Barden January 20, 2018 at 3:16 AM Congratulations on your win, Kim - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-) Kim Rodrigues January 20, 2018 at 7:28 AM Thank you, Greg! These contests are tough! I agree :) Blessings...Kim

Subimal Sinha-Roy January 15, 2018 at 5:26 AM Congratulations, Kim on your placement. Kim Rodrigues January 15, 2018 at 10:53 AM Thanks, Subimal!

Curtis Moorman January 14, 2018 at 11:29 PM Kim, congratulations on your win in Rhoda's contest. Well deserved. Kim Rodrigues January 15, 2018 at 10:53 AM Thanks, Curtis!

Eve Roper January 14, 2018 at 6:41 PM Congratulations on your win,Kim! Hugs Eve ~`* Kim Rodrigues January 15, 2018 at 10:52 AM Thanks, Eve!

Ram R. V. December 21, 2017 at 7:49 PM Great, Kim! Wish you good luck:-) Kim Rodrigues December 21, 2017 at 8:51 PM Thanks, Ram!

CayCay Godwin December 20, 2017 at 4:57 PM Some of these entries are darn good, and this is one of them. The effort is evident and, I think, worth the write you came up with. Yepper, Kim - I think you've got a winner. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Kim Rodrigues December 21, 2017 at 8:52 PM Thanks so much CayCay!

Dale Gregory Cozart December 19, 2017 at 5:29 PM Awesome, but oops! Line 2: "Sway" only has four letters!! Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2017 at 8:13 PM Thank you, Dale! I fixed it! Looks like I had not entered yet!

John Gondolf December 19, 2017 at 12:28 PM Kim, nicely done on this very difficult challenge. Best of luck. John Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2017 at 1:53 PM Thank you, John!

Arturo Michael December 19, 2017 at 10:08 AM Wow...This is good...You've got it...Lovely 5 letter word poem...All the best Kim Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2017 at 11:11 AM Thanks so much, Arturo!

Vijay Pandit December 19, 2017 at 8:41 AM A great achievement..you managed to make these five letter words swing together with rhythm and meaning..best for a win, Kim! Kim Rodrigues December 19, 2017 at 8:50 AM Thanks so much, Vijay!