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Five Letter Words

sweet music swing
     gypsy bells cheer
berry wines swoon
     lulls aloft wings 
warm’d honey cache
     slow’d lyric beats
plays fork’d tunes
     sweet music swing

skirt, tango, twirl
     ruddy flame aglow
tests muddy water
     swims under brows
slakes river lusts
     brews vivid scent 
‘round robin crest
     skirt, tango, twirl

12/18/2017
Rhoda Tripp’s Fem Bogstaver Contest

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2017

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Line Gauthier Date: 5/5/2018 8:47:00 PM A delightful poem, Kim. Belated congrats on your win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/5/2018 8:48:00 PM Thank you, sweet Line!

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 1/20/2018 3:16:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Kim - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/20/2018 7:28:00 AM Thank you, Greg! These contests are tough! I agree :) Blessings...Kim

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 1/15/2018 5:26:00 AM Congratulations, Kim on your placement. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/15/2018 10:53:00 AM Thanks, Subimal!

Curtis Moorman Date: 1/14/2018 11:29:00 PM Kim, congratulations on your win in Rhoda's contest. Well deserved. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/15/2018 10:53:00 AM Thanks, Curtis!

Eve Roper Date: 1/14/2018 6:41:00 PM Congratulations on your win,Kim! Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/15/2018 10:52:00 AM Thanks, Eve!

Ram R. V. Date: 12/21/2017 7:49:00 PM Great, Kim! Wish you good luck:-) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/21/2017 8:51:00 PM Thanks, Ram!

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/20/2017 4:57:00 PM Some of these entries are darn good, and this is one of them. The effort is evident and, I think, worth the write you came up with. Yepper, Kim - I think you've got a winner. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/21/2017 8:52:00 PM Thanks so much CayCay!

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 12/19/2017 5:29:00 PM Awesome, but oops! Line 2: "Sway" only has four letters!! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/19/2017 8:13:00 PM Thank you, Dale! I fixed it! Looks like I had not entered yet!

John Gondolf Date: 12/19/2017 12:28:00 PM Kim, nicely done on this very difficult challenge. Best of luck. John Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/19/2017 1:53:00 PM Thank you, John!

Arturo Michael Date: 12/19/2017 10:08:00 AM Wow...This is good...You've got it...Lovely 5 letter word poem...All the best Kim Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/19/2017 11:11:00 AM Thanks so much, Arturo!

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/19/2017 8:41:00 AM A great achievement..you managed to make these five letter words swing together with rhythm and meaning..best for a win, Kim! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/19/2017 8:50:00 AM Thanks so much, Vijay!