Five Fabulous Fun Footles For Contest

Tour de farce.

   So bold
   Too old
   I tried
   To ride
   A bike 
   Just like
   A champ
   Got cramp
   Too rash 
   Big crash.

   10 / 24 / 2016.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 5:06 PM
great story telling done with footles here. One of the best, George. CONGRATS
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April 9, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Hi Andrea, thankyou for your support and kind comments, my warmest regards to you .George.
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:33 PM
- A great story with few words, George :) - CONGRATULATIONS - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 9, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thankyou Anne-Lise, it's very kind of you to support my poem with such wonderful comments. Please accept my warmest regards for doing so. George.
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:17 PM
I loved this one and the title was SO clever:-) many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 9, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Hello Jan, keep on setting these footles i just love doing them.thanks for the top spot. My regards to you for all of your most kind support. George.
White Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Wow. This is amazing. Complete story in so few lines! Good luck!
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October 24, 2016 at 3:53 PM
This is very funny, George. Good luck!
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