Five Fabulous Fun Footles For Contest

Nag

Clip-clop
Clip-drop:

Old horse,
Of course,

Then threw
A shoe,

Went lame,
Such shame,

Now due
As glue.



October 23, 2016
Five Fabulous Fun Footles Contest
Jan Allison
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 30, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis
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October 30, 2016 at 1:06 PM
- Clip-clop - Clip-drop: Congrats on your great first place in the contest, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 12:56 PM
oh my, sad one for horsey. Loved it. Congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Many congrats on your top spot David - the final footle is sadly true but it did make me smile and was a fabulous way to end the poem:-):-) hugs Jan xx
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October 25, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Glue a horse shoe. Made me smile :) Good luck.
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