Five Fabulous Fun Footles Contest

Oh my, why try.

one day 
we play

in snow 
face glow

hit head
on sled 

too fast 
we crashed 

too old
be bold



Penned 22/10/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 22, 2016 at 10:57 PM
These are great :)
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October 22, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Hi Seren, Ouch, these are some funny footles .I wish you luck in the "Five Fabulous Fun Footles" contest. :-) Alexis
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October 22, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Might wanna put some ice on that bump on yer head... lol... Playing in the snow is most definitly fun, but not so fun when ya get hurt. Reminds me of a t-shirt that says "I'm getting too old for this Sh* " hugs xx
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