Five Fabulous Fun Footles

I Fret


I miss
That kiss

That first
starburst

The one
that's fun

Truth told
I'm old

And yet
I fret

10/27/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Good ones for us oldies!!! Congrats.
Bradfield Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Thanks, Andrea...things do look differenty from this age!! Larry
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:39 PM
- First place in this fun contest Larry, congratulations - well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..it was fun
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Larry this one tugged at the heartstrings I particularly loved the first 3 stanzas:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Jan.Larry
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