Five Fabulous Fun Footles

BRIDE LEFT STOOD UP

Priceless
White dress

Esteem 
Emblem

Bells ring
Leaving

Waiting
Aching 

A bride
Soul pride


For Five Fabulous Fun Footles For Contest
Sponsored by Jan Allison
October 23, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Footles so fine upon the winners’ list is awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Negron Flores Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Thank you Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Congrats, dearie!!
Negron Flores Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Thank you Andrea
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:46 PM
- Congrats on your great second place in the contest, Nayda :) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Negron Flores Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Hugs, Nayda
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:38 PM
A lovely string of footles Nayda. they rhyming on the second one wasn't exact. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Jan
Dutta Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Nice Piece. Good Luck
Negron Flores Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Thank you Anisha
White Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Bells ring. Waiting. I like your footles. Good luck :)
Negron Flores Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Thank you Darren
Garcia Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 9:36 PM
Very lovely Nayda - Waiting and aching sums up about right- until it all starts and time blurs by before you have a chance to blink: )
Negron Flores Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Thank you Phillip for your feedback
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