Alexis Y. Poet Footle

Five Fabulous Fun Footles

Hanky Panky


    Big Hank
 Robbed Bank 

     In Jail
   Met Gail

    Got Out
   Had Clout 

   He's bad 
  She's glad  

  They Wed 
    In Bed


10-21-16

Contest: Five Fabulous Footles
Sponsor: Jan Allison

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David Mohn October 30, 2016 at 7:18 PM Congrats on your 1st place Alexis...very original and funny

Agnes Krampe October 30, 2016 at 2:30 PM Thanks for the chuckle. Nicely done, Alexis. Congrats on your win. Agnes

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2016 at 1:10 PM - This was really fun, Alexis :) - Congrats on your great first place in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2016 at 12:57 PM haha. wed in bed. This is funny, Alexis. Glad to see it and congrats on win

Jan Allison October 30, 2016 at 12:49 PM Many congrats on your top spot Alexis:-) I'm amazed to read this is your first attempt at this form ... you are a natural footler lol:-)hugs Jan xx Alexis Y. October 30, 2016 at 9:43 PM Hi Jan, Thank you so much. I learned how to them from your fine examples. Thanks for my placement in your contest:-) Alexis

Paul Callus October 23, 2016 at 6:47 AM You did really well, Alexis, especially taking into consideration that this is your first attempt at writing footles! I'm still struggling with mine!! Regards // paul

Maurice Yvonne October 22, 2016 at 3:55 PM A great five footles combo. I enjoyed them. I agree with previous comments they are harder than they look. I hope you do well in Jan's contest. Lots of love, armand.

Lim'Rik Flats October 22, 2016 at 10:22 AM Alexis, I agree with Sara, "Footles seem simple but are really not." You've done a great job in my opinion. Write some more please! cheeriets and choc'lit ~ j Alexis Y. October 22, 2016 at 10:47 AM Hi John, Thanks for the for kind compliment. I will do another however it to me ages to do this one. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Eve Roper October 21, 2016 at 9:25 PM very good, Alexis, good luck in the contest I like :) Hugs Eve Alexis Y. October 21, 2016 at 11:47 PM Hi Eve, I'm glad you liked it. It was no easy task but I had a ball writing it. I appreciate that you visited me:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick October 21, 2016 at 5:39 PM Reads like a winner..Footles seem simple but are really not but you did a great job..Thanks for the visit by my page..Sara Alexis Y. October 21, 2016 at 5:43 PM Hi Sara, Thank you so much. This was my first one. Let me tell you, it wasn't easy. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis