Five Fabulous Fun Footles

Hanky Panky


    Big Hank
 Robbed Bank 

     In Jail
   Met Gail

    Got Out
   Had Clout 

   He's bad 
  She's glad  

  They Wed 
    In Bed


10-21-16

Contest: Five Fabulous Footles
Sponsor: Jan Allison

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/30/2016 7:18:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place Alexis...very original and funny
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Date: 10/30/2016 2:30:00 PM
Thanks for the chuckle. Nicely done, Alexis. Congrats on your win. Agnes
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Date: 10/30/2016 1:10:00 PM
- This was really fun, Alexis :) - Congrats on your great first place in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2016 12:57:00 PM
haha. wed in bed. This is funny, Alexis. Glad to see it and congrats on win
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Date: 10/30/2016 12:49:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Alexis:-) I'm amazed to read this is your first attempt at this form ... you are a natural footler lol:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:43:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you so much. I learned how to them from your fine examples. Thanks for my placement in your contest:-) Alexis
Date: 10/23/2016 6:47:00 AM
You did really well, Alexis, especially taking into consideration that this is your first attempt at writing footles! I'm still struggling with mine!! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/22/2016 3:55:00 PM
A great five footles combo. I enjoyed them. I agree with previous comments they are harder than they look. I hope you do well in Jan's contest. Lots of love, armand.
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:22:00 AM
Alexis, I agree with Sara, "Footles seem simple but are really not." You've done a great job in my opinion. Write some more please! cheeriets and choc'lit ~ j
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:47:00 AM
Hi John, Thanks for the for kind compliment. I will do another however it to me ages to do this one. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
Date: 10/21/2016 9:25:00 PM
very good, Alexis, good luck in the contest I like :) Hugs Eve
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/21/2016 11:47:00 PM
Hi Eve, I'm glad you liked it. It was no easy task but I had a ball writing it. I appreciate that you visited me:-) Alexis
Date: 10/21/2016 5:39:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Footles seem simple but are really not but you did a great job..Thanks for the visit by my page..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2016 5:43:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much. This was my first one. Let me tell you, it wasn't easy. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
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