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Five Fabulous Fun Footles

June 8, 2015 
five fabulous fun footles



'FOTTIE' RHYME IN TIME  ©

It stands---
Commands
All walls---
A stall

Maned floors---
Plus doors
Large pen---
Closed men

Blank cards---
Locked yards
High stakes---
High takes

Watch out---
About
Alarms--- 
Gendarmes

Lock up---- 
Cards cut
Sentenced---
Plans axed!

betrayalimageryjudgementmenprisonfootle

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Viv Wigley

June 12, 2015 at 12:59 AM

Well done, Diane. Viv x

Diane M Quinlan

June 12, 2015 at 12:41 PM

Congrats to you for winning as well! Nice job. Thanks for commenting after visiting my poem. It was fun glad you liked it.....didee

Diane M Quinlan

June 12, 2015 at 12:32 PM

Thanks for commenting after visiting my poem. It was fun glad you liked it.....didee

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2015 at 11:09 PM

Congratulations in the contest!

Diane M Quinlan

June 12, 2015 at 12:43 PM

Congrats. to you for your win. Well done as per usual. Enjoyed it! Thanks for the comment much appreciated!.....didee

Casarah Nance

June 11, 2015 at 3:52 PM

nicely done!

Diane M Quinlan

June 11, 2015 at 3:59 PM

Thanks Casarah don't know what happened here your comment coincided with a post I just sent to Daisy......small world! Thank for you comment as well.....didee take care

Diane M Quinlan

June 11, 2015 at 3:57 PM

Thanks Daisy this is a surprise. I must have done something right. Thanks for visiting and liking them......didee take care!

Daisy Marie Yant

June 11, 2015 at 3:09 PM

Congratulations!! Much Love

Diane M Quinlan

June 12, 2015 at 12:44 PM

Congratulations to you too! Fun reading. Got a giggle or two out of it....didee X

Diane M Quinlan

June 11, 2015 at 4:00 PM

Thanks Daisy this is a surprise. I must have done something right. Thanks for visiting and liking them......didee take care! - See more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/_five_fabulous_fun_footles_680681#comments

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 2:51 PM

Many congrats on your win in my footles contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Diane M Quinlan

June 11, 2015 at 4:27 PM

Glad I tried this out. Must mention 2 prisoners in Quebec broke out when I wrote this. They were said to be heading my way! I guess this shook me more and was at the back of my mind when I wrote these five. This is a surprise and thanks never did a footie before and yes they are addictive are they not? Fun play with words it turned out to be. Take care and thank you......didee