Alexis Y. Poet Footle

Five Fabulous Footles: Big Jake

Big Jake
Love’s Cake

He Ate
Whole Crate 

He’s Mad
Ain't  Sad

Not Lean
Just Mean

Large Tum
Huge Bum


3-21-17
Alexis Y.

Contest : Five Fabulous Footles
Sponsor: Jan Allison

Note: I hope nobody finds this offensive. 
This was my attempt to write a humorous 
Footle.

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Paul Callus April 6, 2017 at 4:09 PM Nothing offensive about these footles, Alexis! Just pure fun:) Congratulations on placing first!! Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel April 4, 2017 at 10:22 AM This is great, Alexis, definitely better than my first attempt, ha ha:) congratulations:) a 7:)

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 8:19 PM first attempt and you did FANTASTIC!!! Congrats, and I like the "ain't"

John Michaels April 2, 2017 at 5:00 AM Nice Footles - they really made me chuckle! Congrats on your win!

Kim Rodrigues April 1, 2017 at 6:15 AM Ending too funny! Congrats!

Anisha Dutta April 1, 2017 at 1:11 AM Big congrats Alexis,for fun footle. Best wishes.

Roy Pett March 31, 2017 at 5:29 PM Brilliant fun write Alexis, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :))

Jan Allison March 31, 2017 at 4:59 PM Great humour Alexis - no need to apologise for anything that you write:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Alexis Y. March 31, 2017 at 5:23 PM Hi Jan, You hosted a great contest. I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate my placement in your contest:-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats March 24, 2017 at 10:10 AM SCORE! You made this old man smile — thanks! Keep footl'n kiddo;-). Huggaduggaroonies! ~ j Alexis Y. March 24, 2017 at 4:46 PM Hi John, It's so good to see you. I'm glad it made you smile:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso March 22, 2017 at 9:34 PM Offended? I am very offended!!! Where does this Jake live and why did he not wish to share with me this cake!!!!! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 22, 2017 at 10:22 AM Cool footle, Alexis. Gave me a huge smile. Got some funny lines in them ... he ate, whole crate. That's a riot. A 7 for sure. Love and hugs, lady.

Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2017 at 5:32 PM great job, Alexis. I enjoyed these. On third one, change to "not sad". then you will have two syllables instead of three!

Chris Green March 21, 2017 at 11:22 AM This was funny my friend. It seems we were both on the weight wagon poetically speaking, of course. :)