Five Dumb Stars

Five dumb stars

Oh dearest dear 
On the edge of the night..
Five dumb stars ..
Suck your voice..
And.. hours oh my companion
Ceaselessly leave! 
, 
Five Stars..
And.. the night in my chest extends
And.. getting bigger.., 
The words on the branches of the distance
Jumps and.. tremble..! 
, 
Five dumb stars, 
Oh my heart shiver..
To exile proceed, 
And cinder.. longing in longing
Extinguished! 
, 
Oh dearest dear 
If you just know, 
How the nostalgia in distances die! 
Fatima Nusairat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 28, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Hi Fatima, I saved this one for last cause of the title..:-)... i guess not every star will reach its distance,,, much enjoyed reading all your poems today... Glad you stopped by my poem today. I was wondering when you would.. LOL, I fell in love with your name when I first spotted on the new poet page.. I had a friend name Fatima, back in the elementary. She was the xoolest.. She moved away:-(,, okay, enough about that. thank you for the nice comment. Goodnight, your newest Fan Linda
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October 2, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Thank you for being patient to read all my poems and I'll do the same when ever I can to read yours ..good night dear
Davis Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 10:48 PM
this is very interesting and deep. nice job
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September 23, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Thank you Robin davis you are so nice!
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