Five Days Until Freedom

Five days until freedom

In the stillness of the room,  
shadows stretch like whispered dreams,  
the clock ticks heavy on the wall,  
each second a sigh,  
each minute a memory.

Day one: I trace the dust  
on forgotten books,  
words once alive now silenced,  
like voices lost in a crowd  
that never came.

Day two: the window  
cracks open to a world  
that dances just beyond reach,  
laughter echoing through bars  
made of longing and sorrow.

Day three: I fold my thoughts  
into paper boats,  
set them adrift in the silence,  
watch them sink,  
each wave a reminder of absence.

Day four: the heart learns to hold  
its own weight,  
as the walls whisper tales  
of a land unseen,  
of freedom just beyond the horizon.

Day five: I breathe the air  
thick with unspoken hopes,  
and feel the pulse of the earth,  
each beat a promise,  
each pause a question.

Until freedom comes,  
I remain a shadow,  
waiting for the dawn  
to unveil the light,  
and the echo of my name  
to finally find its home.

By Jay Kirk
Age 15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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December 20, 2024 at 12:11 PM
What an amazing poem. I especially liked the lines "I fold my thoughts into paper boats, set them adrift in the silence, watch them sink, each wave a reminder of absence." ...so good!
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October 10, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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October 7, 2024 at 6:16 AM
Anguish so vividly portrayed, enjoyed this superbly crafted write
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