Five Days Late

Five days late…
His birthday almost forgot-
but not quite…

The hurt lingered deep.

A small package arrived
addressed to him--
Special
from Dad.

Inside: a watch.
A big boy gift,
for sure.

Gold and bright,
crystal light,
backstamped RollX--
a boy’s treasure,
for sure

Too large for his wrist.
No matter.
He would grow tall,
just like his Dad.

The watch was perfect,
just like it was,

Worn each day with pride--
a symbol 
of genuine love and dedication…

How priceless 
he was in Dad’s eyes…

Proof.

Scratches 
and a flaking finish 
didn’t matter.
Neither did 
the crack across the face,
or the fact 
that it always read 
a bit after two.

A good polish--
and it was 
good as new.

Like the day 
he got it.

Five days late.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 3:56 PM
a delightful poem/story that pulled on my heartstrings. I like your poetic voice
Derden Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 4:38 PM
Thank you.
Beaufort Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Danny, a story that's a pleasure to read. Better late than never...plus it might have been delayed during shipping. Hope the young man in the story had a good relationship with his father. There's a lot to imagine here. That makes a poem something special.
Derden Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 4:40 PM
Not much of a relationship at all really...but he held on the watch, that was the relationship...the boy & the watch...and his childish belief that it stood for something real...
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