Fist Responder

A nurse who had never been kissed
Was bathing a cowboy named Twist
He started to spurt
She asked if that hurt
And then checked his pulse at the wrist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:52 PM
snicker snicker. (I had to do something different from Pigeon and Jan)
Leffanta Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:09 PM
Snickers are always welcome, bar none! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 4:03 PM
i don't know how you think of these, rico! good one, as usual...
Leffanta Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:09 PM
My mother complained that I had an head like a doorknob - any girl could turn it, whereas my father insisted I had an open mind where the wind could whistle in one ear and soar out the other, so I suppose whatever women whisper on the wind just blows my mind? Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Hee hee hee ;), X's & Oh's
Leffanta Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:10 PM
A Twist in time? Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 2:18 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:11 PM
You're next! Aloha! Rico
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