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Fist Responder

A nurse who had never been kissed Was bathing a cowboy named Twist He started to spurt She asked if that hurt And then checked his pulse at the wrist

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/12/2020 5:52:00 PM
snicker snicker. (I had to do something different from Pigeon and Jan)
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/12/2020 7:09:00 PM
Snickers are always welcome, bar none! Aloha! Rico
Date: 5/12/2020 4:03:00 PM
i don't know how you think of these, rico! good one, as usual...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/12/2020 7:09:00 PM
My mother complained that I had an head like a doorknob - any girl could turn it, whereas my father insisted I had an open mind where the wind could whistle in one ear and soar out the other, so I suppose whatever women whisper on the wind just blows my mind? Aloha! Rico
Date: 5/12/2020 2:43:00 PM
Hee hee hee ;), X's & Oh's
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/12/2020 7:10:00 PM
A Twist in time? Aloha! Rico
Date: 5/12/2020 2:18:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/12/2020 7:11:00 PM
You're next! Aloha! Rico

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