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Fishing the High Country

A body of translucent blue spreads before him, reflecting heavens of stark purity. He flicks his shiny offering towards depths unknown, and cranks the oiled reel. Time pours slowly, as the reflective lure moves through crystal waters. Again the motions transfix thought, cast, retrieve, move, repeat. Until abruptly, something strikes the silver flasher, now the dance is on. The light weight pole bends to unspoiled water, as the luminescent trout hurls its body above the water’s surface. The aquatic life’s attempt to dislodge the three pronged hook fails. But fish and man have met stares. The dance intensifies, a run is made, line is peeled from spool. Deeper the fish plunges through roiled waters. But he will tire, and face his likely death. He ceases his desperate struggle. The distance between predator and prey withers. The angler now reaches for his worthy prize. He captures the weighty fish through jaw and gill, and lifts his prey from liquid home. He has acquired what he sought, but he knows that he must not devour this mountain rarity. Gently, the fish is revived in the cool water. He is released, and the two part, not as enemies, but as two strangers, who met in the fading twilight of the evening rise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/1/2013 4:06:00 PM
You can write. I could see this as I read.
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:34:00 PM
magnificent such imagery you have a new fan Shadow x smiles
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:22:00 PM
Hi Wayne....first welcome...looks like you are fairly new....I saw the title of this and just had to peek....I'm an absolute avid fisherman..or woman I guess..haha..anyway...this is awesome....reminds me of one I wrote a while back called One With The Rainbow.....have a great weekend
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:27:00 PM
You did a wonderful job with this.. I really enjoyed the read this evening and look forward to reading more of your very excellent poetry. I love the style in which you write in. Cindy
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:55:00 AM
Lakes are so beautiful and serene to visit... catch and release is always good.
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Date: 9/14/2013 9:18:00 AM
First, may I extend the warmest of welcomes to Poetrysoup my friend and second, may I wish you the Goddess of inspiration never stop guiding your pen! Reading your poem I was so much taken by the action that I though myself fishing! Excellent work, thank you for the comment and thank you for letting the trout go! It seems that your poetry is surpassed only by your Magnanimity!
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:41:00 AM
This is a stupendous work wayne ! Welcome to poetry soup. Cheers !
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:25:00 AM
Nice write.
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