Fishing Gone Wrong

fish tangling spinning line fish spits the hook darn first attempt at a Lanterne poem...

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Date: 1/28/2020 11:40:00 AM

Good one. Looks like you got it right. It really does look like a lantern. Too complicated for me.

Running Wolves
Date: 1/28/2020 12:27:00 PM

thank yee dear Lady...

Date: 1/21/2020 2:20:00 PM

Unlike the fishing that went wrong, your first attempt at this form has gone quite well, RW!! Regards // paul

Running Wolves
Date: 1/21/2020 2:23:00 PM

Thank you kind Sir, I truly appreciate you taking time to read and comment.

Date: 1/20/2020 4:06:00 PM

This has happened to me so many times, but I still love fishing. Enjoyed the humor in your lanterne! Hugs, Carolyn

Running Wolves
Date: 1/20/2020 4:24:00 PM

thank you very much. but tell me is this a true and proper lanterne poem???

Date: 1/20/2020 3:29:00 PM

the one that got away.. when it comes to fishing, that could be many...

Running Wolves
Date: 1/20/2020 3:45:00 PM

more than I'd care to admit have gotten away... thank you for reading I appreciate it.