Fishing Gone Wrong

fish tangling spinning line fish spits the hook darn
first attempt at a Lanterne poem...
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Bush Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Good one. Looks like you got it right. It really does look like a lantern. Too complicated for me.
Wolves Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 12:27 PM
thank yee dear Lady...
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Unlike the fishing that went wrong, your first attempt at this form has gone quite well, RW!! Regards // paul
Wolves Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Thank you kind Sir, I truly appreciate you taking time to read and comment.
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 4:06 PM
This has happened to me so many times, but I still love fishing. Enjoyed the humor in your lanterne! Hugs, Carolyn
Wolves Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 4:24 PM
thank you very much. but tell me is this a true and proper lanterne poem???
One Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:29 PM
the one that got away.. when it comes to fishing, that could be many...
Wolves Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:45 PM
more than I'd care to admit have gotten away... thank you for reading I appreciate it.
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