Fishing For a Smile?

Never had I seen so much water before in my life? 

The day before our trip I barley slept... Finally 

we get there and now he says to me, "Hold it firm 

and now throw it back and now forward as hard as 

you can." And with that said? I cast my first line... 

It was my first fishing trip; you see in the inner 

city were we lived? There was no place to fish and 

my dad planned this trip for nearly a whole year. 

My line now out in the water for the very

 first time... 

I asked him how much longer before I would 

get my first bite? 

With that he looked at me and took a deep breath 

and softly he said, "Son I'm not sure... But if 

takes all day? It will be well worth it just to 

see that smile on your face."

Jay Andrew Anderson-Taylor 

Copyright ©1997 Jay Andrew Anderson-Taylor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Fishing is so peaceful and especially if you through the fishie back! Light & Love
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October 7, 2008 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week I loved it! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations Jay on your wonderful poem being featured this week! A warm and nostalgic write. Love, Shar
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October 6, 2008 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on "Fishing For A Smile?" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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October 5, 2008 at 11:27 PM
That was so lovely, full of undying warmth! Congratulations on being featured. ~Chitra
Jordan Avatar
October 5, 2008 at 9:34 PM
Now that poem is just as special as one can get - Congrats on having it featured this week Jay - God Bless
Richards Avatar
October 5, 2008 at 5:40 PM
What a warm and lovely memory! ~ Nicely done~ Carrie
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October 5, 2008 at 3:03 PM
What a lovely exchange between father and son. Reminds me a lot of my brother who loved to fish as a kid. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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