Fishing

Like fish in a pond
we are often fed lines
baited with lures or hook
so tempting. 

Offerings hung
from invisible threads
shimmering promises
so tempting.

Trust not glittering words
deadly snares
so tempting.

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Date: 1/30/2020 7:30:00 PM
Love the stanzas like water flow.
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Date: 12/25/2019 7:08:00 PM
A well stated warning to look at who's holding the bait, not the bait itself.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/25/2019 7:58:00 PM
Yeppers grin
Date: 12/20/2019 2:18:00 PM
Running Wolves: My mind went to last evening debate. Sorry to sully your fine work with politics from either side. :o) Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/20/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you and no worries... If it fits the situation, it fits.
Date: 12/19/2019 9:16:00 PM
Like fish in a pond we are often fed lines baited with lures or hook so tempting. Perfect and so true.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/20/2019 5:45:00 AM
Thank you kind sir
Date: 12/5/2019 10:15:00 PM
"shimmering promises so tempting" - absolutely!
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 6:52:00 AM
Yeah this is another don't get me started lol. Thank you kindly
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