Fishes

in aquatic world peaceful, shimmering fins glide mysteries await by Zyrool 30/6/25

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/8/2025 6:33:00 AM

This poem has great visual appeal. I like the story form.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/9/2025 3:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Hilda. Much appreciated. Have beautiful day, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/7/2025 1:17:00 PM

in my next lifetime I'd love to be a fish lol,

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/7/2025 2:07:00 PM

Thank you for the read, Rose. I would like to be a bird. Stay Blessed my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2025 1:17:00 PM

A soothing write. Thanks for your visit.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/4/2025 1:22:00 PM

Thank you too for the visit and the read. Greatly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful weekend.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/3/2025 10:39:00 AM

Fun, mysterious Haiku, Zyrool. I like it! Have a great week! Bill

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/4/2025 8:39:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Bill. Haikus are fun to write. I do love the ocean and fishes as you say are definitely mysterious. Enjoy your day, my friend.

Anne Winter

Date: 7/1/2025 6:03:00 AM

Something so beautiful about just sitting still and watching the fish, isn't it! Captivating!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/1/2025 7:45:00 AM

Hello Anne, thank you for the read. Totally agree and So peaceful. Have a wonderful new week ahead my friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 6/30/2025 4:01:00 PM

Our Creator has made so many wonderful, mysterious sea creatures. Literally without number. Nice haiku Zyrool

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 6/30/2025 11:09:00 PM

Hello Tom, thank you so much for your comment. I agree our creator has blessed us with so much but few remember to thank him. Wishing you a fantastic new week ahead, my friend.