Fishes


in tranquil waters
scales sparkle in playful dance 
ocean’s fleeting gems 










By Zyrool

dancefishoceanhaiku

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Karen Jones

March 27, 2025 at 1:07 AM

You’re really good at haikus and imagery! Enjoyed!

Hilda Greenhough

February 3, 2025 at 7:25 PM

I enjoy this true-to-form haiku. It has sparkle.

Zyrool Gifford

February 3, 2025 at 10:52 PM

Thank you for the read, Hilda. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day.

Yann Rolland

January 31, 2025 at 1:04 PM

brilliant haiku, even for fishermen i am not, enjoyed the poetical emotion, thanks poet

Zyrool Gifford

January 31, 2025 at 1:55 PM

Hello Yann, glad you think so, much appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous weekend my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

January 31, 2025 at 9:35 AM

This is a brilliant haiku. Fishes always fascinated me.

Zyrool Gifford

January 31, 2025 at 1:53 PM

Thank you so much, for your lovely comment Victor. I am always in awe of their colours. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.

Ink Empress

January 29, 2025 at 4:06 AM

How beautiful! I love fishes and seeing them in their zone, they are indeed oceans fleeting gems, your haiku on fishes is so creative! Absolutely loved reading this! Sending you light always

Zyrool Gifford

January 29, 2025 at 4:39 AM

Thank you so much for dropping by and lovely words. Means a lot. Have a great rest of the week my new friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 27, 2025 at 3:50 PM

Hello Zyrool, I like the line : In tranquil waters scales sparkles in playful dance. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 28, 2025 at 12:06 PM

Hello Zyrool, Your welcome my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford

January 28, 2025 at 5:15 AM

Thank you for dropping by, my friend. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Sam Kauffman

January 27, 2025 at 11:05 AM

So beautifully stated, Gyrool, with amazing "sparkly" images. Images wait to do your bidding, my friend. Your poem is lovely with a unique, poetic voice! Blessings to you dear friend!

Zyrool Gifford

January 27, 2025 at 1:46 PM

Hi Sam, thank you for your lovely words, means a lot. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Have a great new week ahead.

Sara Kendrick

January 27, 2025 at 9:39 AM

Ahhh!! Aren't those saltwater species lovely to look at. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford

January 27, 2025 at 1:42 PM

Yes there are truly breathtaking, such beautiful colours and so bright. Thank you for the read, Sara. Have a wonderful new week my friend.

Jerry Brotherton

January 27, 2025 at 9:27 AM

An excellent haiku, my friend.

Zyrool Gifford

January 27, 2025 at 1:40 PM

Hello Jerry, thank you for dropping by and leaving your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Hope all’s going well with you. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.

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