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Fishes

in tranquil waters scales sparkle in playful dance ocean’s fleeting gems By Zyrool

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Karen Jones

Date: 3/27/2025 1:07:00 AM

You’re really good at haikus and imagery! Enjoyed!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/3/2025 7:25:00 PM

I enjoy this true-to-form haiku. It has sparkle.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/3/2025 10:52:00 PM

Thank you for the read, Hilda. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day.

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/31/2025 1:04:00 PM

brilliant haiku, even for fishermen i am not, enjoyed the poetical emotion, thanks poet

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/31/2025 1:55:00 PM

Hello Yann, glad you think so, much appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous weekend my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2025 9:35:00 AM

This is a brilliant haiku. Fishes always fascinated me.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/31/2025 1:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, for your lovely comment Victor. I am always in awe of their colours. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/29/2025 4:06:00 AM

How beautiful! I love fishes and seeing them in their zone, they are indeed oceans fleeting gems, your haiku on fishes is so creative! Absolutely loved reading this! Sending you light always

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/29/2025 4:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for dropping by and lovely words. Means a lot. Have a great rest of the week my new friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/27/2025 3:50:00 PM

Hello Zyrool, I like the line : In tranquil waters scales sparkles in playful dance. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/28/2025 12:06:00 PM

Hello Zyrool, Your welcome my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/28/2025 5:15:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by, my friend. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/27/2025 11:05:00 AM

So beautifully stated, Gyrool, with amazing "sparkly" images. Images wait to do your bidding, my friend. Your poem is lovely with a unique, poetic voice! Blessings to you dear friend!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/27/2025 1:46:00 PM

Hi Sam, thank you for your lovely words, means a lot. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Have a great new week ahead.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2025 9:39:00 AM

Ahhh!! Aren't those saltwater species lovely to look at. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/27/2025 1:42:00 PM

Yes there are truly breathtaking, such beautiful colours and so bright. Thank you for the read, Sara. Have a wonderful new week my friend.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/27/2025 9:27:00 AM

An excellent haiku, my friend.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/27/2025 1:40:00 PM

Hello Jerry, thank you for dropping by and leaving your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Hope all’s going well with you. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.