Doris Culverhouse Poet Rengay

Fisherman(Co-Written With Sara Kendrick)

Swimming, life carefree
Net tightens around the school
Deliverance, grace
  
       May your hook always be cast
        Where you least expect fish caught

Synergism, save
These lost fish, grateful intent
Catch and release, Life

       Responsible now
       Freedom, new life in warm water
         Breach, spout words, joy, sing

School of life, protective school
Numbers rise with the right bait

Bait, love, nuturance
Guide... North Star...The leader Home
Reward eternal life

Thanks Mom!! you are the Best EVER!! No matter what Ashley says about you!! :)

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 21, 2010 at 9:17 PM Dear Doris, Another fine Tantum POEM Bravo YOUNG LADY And YOUR Gracious Mother TOO I assume "ASHLEY" is YOUR Sister YOUR Avid Admirer ALWAYS...HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 18, 2010 at 7:56 PM A beautiful collaboration write and a stirring and thought provoking Rengay.. another form I have not heard of or used as yet.. u two make a great duo all the way around.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Marty Owens February 18, 2010 at 6:05 PM "I will make you fishers of men" Wonderful poem...love your co-writes in the Rengay...Marty

Patricia Opel Jaye February 18, 2010 at 2:36 PM What a sheer delight sometimes we as poets tend to write way too many words it can take away from the whole enjoyable insight great work take care Patricia Opel Jaye.

Carolyn Devonshire February 18, 2010 at 8:20 AM Fish travel in "schools" and are never alone. There have been times I have dreamt of being a grouper. Always, I am warning the others to stay away from the "net" that pulls them into the gas chamber we call air. Spent many years fishing and really enjoyed this one! Love, Carolyn

Dana Hall February 18, 2010 at 7:41 AM nice to meet you. Thank you for your support as i am brand new here. I read many of your poems and see your talent. Dana Is there any other way to communicate here or just by posting comments??