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Fish Tanka

I gaze at a bowl Where goldfish swivels through moss Its fine gills aglow--- With such aquatic prowess As it wiggles restlessly A New Tanka Contest Mar 31, 2015

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Date: 4/18/2015 2:36:00 PM
Nice win, Rhoma... Linda
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:18:00 PM
Rhoma:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:33:00 AM
there you go, rhoma.. another win for you.. sweet congrats!
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Date: 4/10/2015 12:00:00 AM
I like this picture of the goldfish. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 4/7/2015 8:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win! I like the fish. So cute.
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:11:00 PM
How clever......a fish tanka !! Love the sense of humor with this one!! Congratulations making the winner's list!!
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the winning placement. Nicely done.
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Date: 4/7/2015 5:03:00 PM
I like the play on words..Congrats on this winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:46:00 PM
Rhoma, congratulations on this descriptive tanka win and a 7. Blessings
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Date: 4/7/2015 11:55:00 AM
congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:23:00 AM
Congrats on a nice win, Rhoma! Hugs, Kimberly
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