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Fish Tank Universe

Fish tank universe Here we all are Planets and galaxies Solar systems Stars in this infinite jar So big we can’t travel it all Tinted glass no one can see out People watching us like God What we have been told is that a bigger Power controls us We can’t see it Even though we sure do try to This being is who puts us in our lives This fish tank is not measurable But the world outside is unthinkable We can try to pray and communicate to the outside world But like a fish no one can understand We might enter this outside world after our adventure here comes to an end But we can’t communicate to each other The people in the outside world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/2/2016 12:57:00 AM
nice to see this one again...cat
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Date: 3/20/2015 12:50:00 PM
Hi Cat, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:04:00 PM
Cat G, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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