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Fish Eyes Bulge

Remove the joy from life replace it with drudge Fill a freshwater pond with pitch-black sludge Fish eyes bulge, gills choke ~ underwater's stroke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/24/2025 5:39:00 AM
Oh my! We don’t want to be choked out. There is this side of life…one day it will be no more.
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Date: 2/22/2025 10:07:00 PM
Interesting poem can have a double meaning!
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Date: 2/21/2025 7:06:00 AM
Lol lets keep the earth clean and free of sludge. I recall the Valdez event major sludge. Michael
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