First World War

I envy the dust, the way it moves all free and careless,
released from it’s sleeping state the thunderous pounds 
of late shelling, again endless. 

Muffled shouting, through this trench confounding,

Mustard attack, gas mask aside, fingers in fumbling fight
bitter cold night in a field. 

No fireside, food to bite
cigarettes to smoke and mates to joke.

last one gone two days ago up one minute then vanished in a puff of smoke.

this place is beyond reality, it’s beyond insanity 
fighting for earth no mother walked nor father built.

If they want to fight then bring it to my hills, not this flat wasteland of mud, blood, bones and chills.

We were thrown into this bloody war,
and we wont have our say, like we've never had before.

Taken to the slaughter history will say, 
throwing ourselves forward like tidal-waves. 

Waves on waves of sacrificial lunacy again and again.

we've taken little ground and this other trench looks bad, worse than ours 
doesn't looked heavily manned looks like we lost more man.

What do we gain now? apart from more time in thought.

those withered layers of rotting feverish flesh, one part is fresh 
the other pure dread. 

captain is shouting, up on my legs 
what’s going on...conscious or dead?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Weird story...enjoyed it. Congrats, Sunita.
Arnone Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Ambiguous ending; but, chilling nonetheless. Congrats! :-)
Scars Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:57 PM
hmmm....wow very powerful message Paul! I very much enjoyed this poem...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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