First Waltz

her dimples show, her face aglow, as you ask her to dance that first waltz. Held in your arms swaying, your bodies close. can hear hearts beating, in time to a Strauss waltz
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 6:37 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Thx Jan ....Seren
A  Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:56 PM
nice win. SKAT
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:03 PM
Thank you Skat.....Seren
Callus Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:00 PM
An enjoyable and delightful first waltz, Seren! Congrats on your lovely top win. // paul
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:03 PM
Thank you Paul, I love to waltz....Seren
Nance Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Wonderful dance!
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Thank you Cas.... seren
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 11:10 PM
I love this. Another person who did waltz same as I did. Congrats, Seren.
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Waltz is do graceful, I love them....Seren
Merryman Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 5:49 PM
Congrats, Seren on taking 2nd place in my contest! A very sweet write! Well done! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 6:19 PM
Thank you Kim i am chuffed....Seren
A  Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:56 PM
THAT IS BEAUTIFUL
Bateman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Hello Seren!! Yes -- a Johann Strauss for the first waltz is a perfect fit here indeed. Very Well-Done and a "7." Best Wishes, Gary
Hopper Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Oh I love this! A beautiful flow and lovely tale! A 7!
Roberts Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Thank you Anna...Seren
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Seren - If it's for contest, I wish you good luck - I want to share our poem: - Two Stars Sparkle as One Soul - with you today :) - Hope your weekend will be relaxing and lovely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 5:16 AM
oh how beautiful Seren - the words dance off the page:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Thanks Jan.....Seren
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