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flashes of light fanciful often ridiculous ellipses of natural extrasensory power ideas to stimuate&develop whole views eccentric legendary to see a point grasp an opportunity literature in a figurative way this perspective realm of experience of emotion &recurring physical causation where plausibilty is never proof swirling abstraction hesitation swooping whorls fabricated shapes evasions of bewilderment surface in gestures of concession to tenuously tease&tempt in silent scrutiny yet arousing an impression of indeterminate conclusions of arrested moments to awake & illume my view

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Date: 9/26/2019 11:19:00 AM
I agree completely with Caren! ...in silent scrutiny, yet arousing...
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/26/2019 11:46:00 AM
Cheers Jeanne,thanks for your kind words
Date: 9/26/2019 11:11:00 AM
A gorgeous write Brian. " proof swirling abstraction hesitation swooping whorls fabricated shapes evasions of bewilderment" - exquisitely written!
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:45:00 AM
Caren,thanks for your encouraging comments.