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flashes of light
                      fanciful
                     often ridiculous
                    ellipses of natural
extrasensory power
ideas
      to stimuate&develop
whole views
eccentric
            legendary
to see a point
grasp an opportunity

literature
       in a figurative 
                      way
this perspective realm
             of experience
of emotion
            &recurring
              physical causation
where plausibilty is never
                                  proof
swirling abstraction
                hesitation
                 swooping whorls
                   fabricated shapes
evasions
         of bewilderment
                       surface
in gestures
        of concession
to tenuously
             tease&tempt
in silent scrutiny
yet
    arousing
              an impression
              of indeterminate
                      conclusions

of arrested moments
to awake
             & illume
                          my view

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