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Abandonment

I was seventeen, so were you. With the innocence of a child, tabhair me mo chroi duit. (I gave my heart to you.) Starved of love 'till you came along. Your kiss so deep, intellect so strong. You picked me out, held me close. Told me you loved me. Made me feel the most loved and cherished until, suddenly, out of the blue, it was no longer us....just you. On my eighteenth, like a red hot coal, you dropped my hand, my heart, my soul. Abandoned me to a loveless life, protecting my heart from even more strife. I did not realise then depression would be your lifelong friend. I forgive you now that time has passed and wish you happiness that will last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/1/2016 3:50:00 AM
As a poem, a very satisfying read ... congratulations ...
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Jean Murray
Date: 12/1/2016 7:43:00 AM
As always, thank you Probir. I appreciate your visits.
Date: 11/30/2016 5:37:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 11/30/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Jan. You were and are always there for me.
Date: 11/30/2016 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations Jean in the placement of the contest.
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Jean Murray
Date: 11/30/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Nayda. Took me thirty years to recover, but I'm better now.
Date: 2/4/2016 4:39:00 PM
Such a sad ending to your first love Jean :-( hugs Jan xx7
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/4/2016 5:41:00 PM
Sent you a reply on Sopupmail twice! Hope you received it Jan. And thank you for all advice.

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