Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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First Things First

first things first, we quieten heart
melding our mind therein
all souls be one, none stand apart
as bliss throbs on our skin

all we do, is be still
shaped upon the anvil
surrendered to Gods will

quenching thirst
first things first

20-August-2021
Quietus

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Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2021 at 4:42 PM yes, it appears you are always using the first part of your first line. Another lovely example.

Constance La France August 31, 2021 at 1:24 PM Seeker, I love this one the most of the Quietus poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Unseeking Seeker August 31, 2021 at 5:57 PM Thank you, Constance!