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first things first, we quieten heart melding our mind therein all souls be one, none stand apart as bliss throbs on our skin all we do, is be still shaped upon the anvil surrendered to Gods will quenching thirst first things first 20-August-2021 Quietus

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Date: 9/13/2021 4:42:00 PM
yes, it appears you are always using the first part of your first line. Another lovely example.
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Date: 8/31/2021 1:24:00 PM
Seeker, I love this one the most of the Quietus poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 8/31/2021 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!

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