First Swim In Spring

first swim in spring

water black
deep as the end of the world.
scent of cedar roots
ancient tangles
that hold the rocks together.
pines bent before the wind
old crones thin and wrinkled.

I wade into the lake
submerge
feel cold crisp life
crackle through me. 
cleave the silken sheen,
strike out for the far shore.

slow delicious strokes;
left arm raised, dig in
flow past my body
lift right raise
dig in
water sings in my ears 
like lilting ripples 
of glass chimes. 

roll
float 
a specklespark sky 
umbrellas over me
the big dipper
venus
shine we float together

loons sing love dirges
sad and sweet
somewhere a beaver tail
slaps a warning
into the northern night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Armishaw Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:35 PM
Love the imagery, very rich and refreshing.
Cresswell Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Dear D, once again you encourage me. Thank you.
Fleming Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Another highly descriptive and quality poem from your extremely capable pen, Patricia; I, personally, put it on the same level as your "stormbearers" poem -- it really is that good! Loved every verse! Especially the last one with its references to the Loons and Beaver; the Scots call them Loons, us English refer to them as Divers. An enjoyable and informative read once again, Patricia. :) john
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September 26, 2017 at 6:53 PM
John the silence suddenly broken by the loons and then the beaver is so magical my words hardly do it justice. It is truly visceral. I am so glad you enjoy them All my life I have surrounded b such heartbreaking beauty I want to share it. Let others know what nature does for us.
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September 26, 2017 at 12:50 PM
I want to dive into your words Patricia. I read your two previous posts last night wishing I had you in book form, dog eared and feathered spine.
Cresswell Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:49 PM
Come and dive into my bay a lot softer than words. I know what you mean there are poems I feel the same way about. Thank you.
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