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First Star I'Ve Seen Tonight

In the stillness of the Christmas Eve silent night, Colored lights are blinking as the snowflakes fall, And full of yuletide joy, my eyes behold the sight, Of the vivid Christmas star, as lovely as I recall! In the spirit of the season, I say a fervent prayer, That our planet sees healing, and also lives in love. Pale moon is shining, as snowflakes dance in midair, And my path is illumined by a twinkling star above! Written on: 12/19/2020 For: Christmas Rhyme only 8 - 12 lines - Premium Prize Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 12/20/2020 8:40:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, You have created such a lovely portrait with words. I could picture a star shining bright. Your prayer is exactly what our world needs. Excellent job. Have a good evening:-)Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2020 10:09:00 AM
Hi Alexis, Your cheerful thoughts have brightened my morning. Thank you for your appreciation. Merry Christmas. :=)
Date: 12/19/2020 10:43:00 PM
A beautiful poem full of graceful intentions. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/20/2020 7:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for the happy outlook. :=)
Date: 12/19/2020 8:41:00 PM
Pretty as a picture, with a heartfelt prayer. Let us hope that your words get us there! Holiday Light, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/19/2020 9:05:00 PM
Thank you very much for the supportive, happy thoughts, Gershon. Christmas Cheer, Evelyn :=)
Date: 12/19/2020 6:01:00 PM
Good luck in the Christmas poem. This is beautiful.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/19/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much for saying so, and for your well wishes, Caren. :=)

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