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First Spring Eulogy

They flocked into town. Loud, Pushy, Laughing They left their Tropics To celebrate the Great Fest, Banqueted by Instinct. Mashing and gulping sour Red and Purple bits, Juice dribbling sticky Down their Breasts, They stumble about, From one hung over bar, To Another. Each drink Drives them Farther until, One By One They drunkenly Crash to their Deaths In the Windows we use To View Them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 5:10:00 AM
Rain - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:00:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 6:57:00 PM
Rain - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2008 8:55:00 AM
This is a stunning indictment of spring breakers ... smile ... and a great feature this week! Congratulations, Rain. I look forward to reading more of your writing! Welcome to the Soup!!
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Date: 10/22/2008 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2008 7:20:00 AM
The creative format adds visual interest to you poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2008 8:51:00 PM
Great poem with a very profound ending - Congrats on being featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:49:00 PM
Interesting ending. Congratulations Rain on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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