First Snowflakes

bundled in warm clothes
tuque down to my nose
pretty fluffy red mittens
layers at my neck soft as kittens

let the winds howl
and the snow fall
christmas less than a month away
keeping naughty thoughts at bay

counting down the days with glee
putting up the christmas tree
hanging stockings with our names
dreams of fancy toys and games

made a list for santa claus
hoping for a gift decked with four paws
mugs of cocoa with some marshmallows
wrapping presents with big bows

licking spoons with cookie dough
singing christmas carols on the radio
jitterbugs and odds and ends
inviting over family and friends 



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~THE MAGIC OF CHRISTMAS~ 2023

AP: 2nd place 2021, 3rd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcguire Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Thank you of bringing my children to mind as I read this great poem!
Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:18 PM
That's wonderful, Timothy. Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 9:29 PM
This is terrific, Line. I've never celebrated Christmas, but this poem has given me a window through which to view it and to understand its immense attraction. A FAVE for me. Thanks!! :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Awesome, Gershon. Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Kiser Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:03 PM
You do have that Christmas Spirit! Lovely, happy poem that has me anticipating the festivities.
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Nance Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:14 AM
How fun ;) puts me in the spirit. Happy holidays!
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Casarah.
Salehi Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Beautifully expressed... Happy Holidays.
Salehi Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Always...
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 12:21 AM
Thank you so much, Pashang.
Devonshire Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 5:23 PM
You capture well many of the festive activities we engage in as Christmas approaches, Line. And I do hope you get that "gift with four paws." A delightful read. Hugs, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Yikes... timing is everything... maybe in a few years. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Carolyn.
Sands Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 5:13 PM
I really enjoyed this fun poem. Well done! It reminded me to get some cocoa too ! lol :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 6:13 PM
LOL Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.
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