First Rate Finnish Firetrap

It was a first rate Finnish firetrap
Anyone who stayed was a big sap
I would have to be dead
To lie in that bed
Place not safe enough to take a quick crap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Oh my! Well, it must have been really bad. Probably rampant with bed bugs, too.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 5:45 AM
I am sure it had cooties and Covid-too
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