First Rain

Finally the rain has started

After the flowers have departed.

Two months of sunshine,

Though hot and sublime,

Has left the garden broken hearted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Good job of making a hot, dry summer sound better...Thanks for stopping by and commentng on my work..Sara
A   Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 11:57 PM
Enjoyed your poem Fracine,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:37 PM
I enjoyed reading this one, Francine. thanks for your comments today! LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 8:44 PM
A nice realistic observation of the garden when it rains. But it's nature's cycle
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