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First Rain

Finally the rain has started After the flowers have departed. Two months of sunshine, Though hot and sublime, Has left the garden broken hearted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/8/2010 11:20:00 AM
Good job of making a hot, dry summer sound better...Thanks for stopping by and commentng on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/7/2010 11:57:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem Fracine,..p.d.
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one, Francine. thanks for your comments today! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/7/2010 8:44:00 PM
A nice realistic observation of the garden when it rains. But it's nature's cycle
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