Carla Jones Poet Rhyme

First Proper Love

first proper love,
power and Aphrodite, lady of the doves.
did she choose,
she chose for me to loose.
the pretence of love for a while,
until she cut the threads I am only a child.
I allowed myself to love,
forgetting the lady of doves.
I thought you were the one,
I thought you were that special someone.
I still think you are,
But maybe I am trying to cover certain scars.
I thought I had moved on,
but still I find myself thinking of you.
I shouldn't,
I cant.
It shall only bring me pain.

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Beata Agustin September 2, 2025 at 9:08 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 28, 2016 at 11:14 AM CARLA, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **