First Poem

after night
morning write

early sun
day begun

new breath taken
I awaken

words dance on page

I awaken
new breath taken

day begun
early sun

morning write
after night


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July 14, 2026 at 7:33 PM
I'm very taken with this poem and read through about five times! It's the kind of poem which I believe would make an excellent study for students in a poetry workshop — I think new poets would benefit from studying this poem. Excellent word choice, imagery, and technique. You are very talented. Many blessings to you!
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