First Picnic

The rains have lasted all the spring.
We’re longing for some sun.
With advent of the end of school
We look to June for fun.

The kids have found their bathing suits
And have them at the ready.
It’s not fair in vacation time
For rains to pour so steady.

The first nice weekend that we have,
We know where we’ll be going.
They have the hampers all cleaned out
For  picnic food we’re stowing.

I will rise early on that day
And chicken I’ll be frying.
They each will ask for favorite foods
To please them, I’ll be trying.

Their daddy will gas up the car
And tell us all to hurry.
He’ll want to go while sun is out
And weather not a worry.

We’re heading for Cranberry Lake
Next to the picnic ground
Separating the  two waters.
The other side is Puget Sound.

It’s all part of Deception Park,
Every visitor’s destination
When they’re in Northwest Washington,
One of most scenic states in Nation. 

There will be a crowd of other folks,
All soaking up the sun
And trying out the waters
Eager for some summer fun.

Our son will try the diving board 
To prove he can be bold, 
The girls will test lake gingerly 
and howl if it's too cold.

They will have hearty appetites
For all my picnic fixings.
I will have brought potato salad
And other salad mixing’s.

Chocolate cake and water melon,
Will be part of the desserts.
By now we are so hungry
We will eat until it hurts. 

We’ll go home at the end of day
All happy and contented.
It has been one more special time
To keep us all cemented.




For Carol's " Picnic  Time"contest Won no. 4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 10:58 PM
the yummy chicken picnic scores high! Congratulations, dear Joyce.
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May 19, 2011 at 9:46 AM
Love the way you described this picnic, Joyce. A great time was had by all, even if they may have had too much fried chicken and potato salad. It's the contentment at the end of the day that makes a picnic so special. Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn
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May 19, 2011 at 8:47 AM
A wonderful write on picnic Joyce.. I loved your mentioning of strong family ties. Congrats on your win love, gautami
Freeman Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Joyce, so great to see you near the top of the list with this classic. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, MOses
Song Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Hi Carol- This is a nice description of an awesome outting, all the way down to the delicious dishes... The cementing of a family does occur by time spent, not necessarily on gifts and such...you got it right...contented and cemented!! Congrats- Gwendolen
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:16 AM
Congrats Joyce on your well deserved win in the contest of Carol..
Guzzi Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 10:13 AM
ahhh "gingerly!" a most delightful scene and word! lovely win. Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:56 AM
super cheesr for the dazzling win, jiyce... impressive! :) huggs
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May 18, 2011 at 7:18 AM
Great fun. Many congrats on your win, Joyce : )
Taylor Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:06 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of Carol, Joyce
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May 18, 2011 at 6:51 AM
congrats on your win with this nice piece, love cory
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May 18, 2011 at 5:02 AM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win in the picnic contest with this delightful write my friend.. full of fun and joy... and memories... enjoy your top spot for excellence my friend..luv..
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 4:50 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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May 16, 2011 at 7:08 PM
this was a great lay out of a perfect day!! good job! cory
Foulk Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 7:51 PM
enjoyed reading this one, very well written.
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May 14, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Hungry and smiles come from this winner Joyce...luv Michael
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 2:35 PM
You have mentioned many of my favorites with fried chicken, watermelon and ESPECIALLY potato salad> I just LOVE that stuff. So do you use mayo or salad dressing, JOyce? I enjoyed your outing!! And thanks for telling me what is going on with you.
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