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They are many things
Defeat
Broken and decrepit
They flinch
The hefty earned the sky
It croons
That there is no beauty
Therefore there is no admiration
There is no inspiration
"There is only Reason"
They lament
But the land is not despaired
For it is but art
The sky sighs
The white extols
The sky moults a tear of its garden
The anew grows yet still groan
The sky scoffs
They do all but presently despair
For no despair is reaped in these lands
And no hope is sewn in these lands
Harmony
Dearest moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/23/2016 9:38:00 PM
Nhloe Varforth, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:13:00 PM
It just is.... Beautiful.
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