First of May

"First of May"


When I was a child I ran away
To live with the circus in Bombay,
Where all things were new
And possible, too!
So, for this they called me "First of May"!

I started out selling concessions:
Hot! Popcorn! Hot! Peanuts! Confections!
But in my spare time,
I'd secretly climb
Into the Great Cannon--for missions!

My costume and cape were blue and grey,
Spark'ling like stars with each flight--Away!
By day selling fare--
Nights--Fly Through The Air!
Dreams do come true when you're "First of May"!*

deborah burch©
4/28/2012

*Note: "First of May" is a circus term used to describe 'newbies' who come to the circus...it means that everything is new,exciting, fresh, and anything/everything is possible! :)
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:02:00 PM
Wow another Bombay gal! LOL it does seem a magical place! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/20/2012 8:36:00 PM
lol yeah thats what i thought when i read yours ;). congrats on yours too! hugs love you much den
Date: 5/19/2012 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/20/2012 8:37:00 PM
thank you carol. big hugs love ya deb
Date: 5/19/2012 4:30:00 AM
Nice poem... and congrats... Terry
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/20/2012 8:33:00 PM
thank you terry and big congrats on my fav eyes win for you. well done. hugs love ya deb
Date: 5/19/2012 3:48:00 AM
Cap'n DEb congrats on your win, I am glad I judged this blind as I would never had guessed this was you, have not heard the first of May thing before, but very entertaining..you were away from water for this ha ha ha ha..David
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/20/2012 8:31:00 PM
thank you so much david :) im on mobil my puter has passed away. i wonder if he caught the same virus that trecies had, lots of same issues. anyway thank you dear friend. i may be popping in and out of port...or chardouney.lol.love ya cap'ndeb
Date: 4/30/2012 7:52:00 PM
hey, this is pretty good, little Miss First of May. I hope you do well with it. I love limerick form for this kind of theme.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/20/2012 8:38:00 PM
thanks andrea...love ya deb
Date: 4/29/2012 2:11:00 PM
Cute one story that you have told in poetic form..Reads like a winner to me...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Being shot out of cannon would be a very serious part of the circus act..Sara
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/20/2012 8:13:00 PM
thank you sara..hugs love ya deb
Date: 4/29/2012 12:01:00 PM
i love this imaginative and informative piece. i wonder why they call newbies first of may
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/29/2012 12:39:00 PM
lol...thank you...jack!!! big hugs,love deb
Date: 4/28/2012 6:53:00 PM
Wow you bet the pants off me!! reads like a win to me! I liked my Fat MAn limerick better but David wanted US in the limerick! bang up job! LOL Light & Love
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 7:13:00 PM
lol...You honour me highly!! :) but look, as far as the 'Fat Man' goes, just 'be' the 'Fat Man'...ya think?lol a challenge I know :O lol...we are in the world of make believe and can be anything/everything is possible :)
Date: 4/28/2012 5:16:00 PM
This is a fantastic write my friend! I loved how you brought it all together under the "First of May" title and meaning! That's a dangerous event to go through for a newcomer...the canon! I really enjoyed this write that I have read this evening! I love your poem greatly! Great Work!! (I'm back)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 5:41:00 PM
omg!! Russell!! do my eyes decieve me? You have been sorely missed my dear friend!! I pray you are well!! Welcome back!!! *whew* so glad you're back!! :)))) BIG HUG , love deb!!!
Date: 4/28/2012 5:04:00 PM
Love this one, Deb, good luck in the contest, jag
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 5:47:00 PM
:) thank you Jag very very much!! hugs, love deb
Date: 4/28/2012 4:17:00 PM
Ahhhh I like this one!! Very nice. Best of luck in Dave's contest. Btw. Booooommmmm that was me being shot out of cannon lol. Hugs n luv Michael
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 4:21:00 PM
LMAO!!! too funny!! :D
Date: 4/28/2012 3:38:00 PM
Deb, thanks for explainig what the "Firs of May" means to circus performers. I wish I could see you donning your costume and cape and flying over the Grand Canyon. As you say, anything's possible when you're the "First of May"! Excellent entry for David'scontest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 3:53:00 PM
:) lol, thank you so much Carolyn!! I have an extra sequened costume if you'd like to have a go? ;) love,deb
Date: 4/28/2012 3:31:00 PM
Both young and "older" children love circus, and we all have a clown is us.If only we dare to show it. Very well written, wish you luck in contest Deb. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 3:36:00 PM
:) lol...Thank you sweet Anne Lise!! hope your weekend is good so far :) much love deb
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