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First Night of Forever
Love is a serenade that never ends...
Once upon a romantic starry night Two lover's hearts went soaring off in flight The setting a lovely magical scene Enchanting beauty befitting a queen. Midnight sky strung with glittering jewels Twinkled on the sea, dancing to each move A summer breeze caressed their sun kissed skin Never was a night as charming as this. Fairies gathered to gaze from on a star For romance delighted their tiny hearts So enchanting was this magical sight They sprinkled their fairy dust o'er the night. Soft golden sand gently cushioned their feet Walking along lovely crescent shaped beach Only sound was opera of the sea Soothing ebb and flow of waves melody. He took her in his arms and held her tight Whispered "darling you look lovely tonight" "You've made all my wishes and dreams come true” She sighed, he sighed and the fairies sighed too. They frolicked merrily at edge of sea For today they'd joined in matrimony.
...If music be love’s rhapsody, play on.
4th February 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/23/2021 7:58:00 PM
Beautifully romantic like s fairytale. Loved reading this. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/24/2021 1:11:00 AM
Thank you Rama, if only fairytales could come true... Belle
Date: 2/8/2021 8:37:00 PM
Gee, this is elegant, ethereal, and sweet all at the same time. Right into my FAVES. Wonderful write, Belle! :) gw
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Date: 2/9/2021 1:01:00 AM
Thank you Gershon that’s so lovely of you, a delightful start to the day. Belle :-)
Date: 2/4/2021 4:10:00 PM
I'm a sucker for romance and this one tickles me inside. Great Job Belle! This is one of my favs.
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Date: 2/5/2021 12:12:00 AM
That’s music to my heart, thank you Justin very much... Belle
Date: 2/4/2021 12:15:00 PM
- Romantic from top to bottom ... a wonderful poem, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2021 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for that Ann-Lise, I’m most grateful ~ Hugs Belle :-)
Date: 2/4/2021 11:16:00 AM
WoW!Belle, What a magical and romantic write. I enjoyed it from to finish. Well done. PS, It's good to see a new poem from you. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/4/2021 11:44:00 AM
Hi Alexis, thank you - I’ve taken some time out of the Soup, things to catch up on and all that jazz. Have a great day yourself too ~ Belle :-)
Date: 2/4/2021 10:08:00 AM
Very romantic Belle, cupid is in the air. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 2/4/2021 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Tom! Cupid is in the air but is anyone there for him to take aim at during this second lockdown, I wonder :-) Belle
Date: 2/4/2021 9:51:00 AM
Your poem oozes with magic and romance. ~~
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Date: 2/4/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thank you a Victor, that’s all anyone could hope for, most appreciated ~~ Belle