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First Night of Forever

First Night of Forever  
Love is a serenade that never ends...
Once upon a romantic starry night
Two lover's hearts went soaring off in flight
The setting a lovely magical scene
Enchanting beauty befitting a queen.

Midnight sky strung with glittering jewels
Twinkled on the sea, dancing to each move
A summer breeze caressed their sun kissed skin
Never was a night as charming as this.

Fairies gathered to gaze from on a star
For romance delighted their tiny hearts
So enchanting was this magical sight
They sprinkled their fairy dust o'er the night.

Soft golden sand gently cushioned their feet
Walking along lovely crescent shaped beach
Only sound was opera of the sea
Soothing ebb and flow of waves melody.

He took her in his arms and held her tight
Whispered "darling you look lovely tonight"
"You've made all my wishes and dreams come true”
She sighed, he sighed and the fairies sighed too.

They frolicked merrily at edge of sea
For today they'd joined in matrimony.
...If music be love’s rhapsody, play on.
4th February 2021

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Rama Balasubramanian February 23, 2021 at 7:58 PM Beautifully romantic like s fairytale. Loved reading this. Take care Rama Beryl Edmonds February 24, 2021 at 1:11 AM Thank you Rama, if only fairytales could come true... Belle

Gershon Wolf February 8, 2021 at 8:37 PM Gee, this is elegant, ethereal, and sweet all at the same time. Right into my FAVES. Wonderful write, Belle! :) gw Beryl Edmonds February 9, 2021 at 1:01 AM Thank you Gershon that’s so lovely of you, a delightful start to the day. Belle :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2021 at 12:15 PM - Romantic from top to bottom ... a wonderful poem, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beryl Edmonds February 4, 2021 at 12:41 PM Thank you so much for that Ann-Lise, I’m most grateful ~ Hugs Belle :-)

Alexis Y. February 4, 2021 at 11:16 AM WoW!Belle, What a magical and romantic write. I enjoyed it from to finish. Well done. PS, It's good to see a new poem from you. Have a great day:-) Alexis Beryl Edmonds February 4, 2021 at 11:44 AM Hi Alexis, thank you - I’ve taken some time out of the Soup, things to catch up on and all that jazz. Have a great day yourself too ~ Belle :-)

Tom Cunningham February 4, 2021 at 10:08 AM Very romantic Belle, cupid is in the air. Hope you're well Tom Beryl Edmonds February 4, 2021 at 11:40 AM Thank you Tom! Cupid is in the air but is anyone there for him to take aim at during this second lockdown, I wonder :-) Belle

Victor Buhagiar February 4, 2021 at 9:51 AM Your poem oozes with magic and romance. ~~ Beryl Edmonds February 4, 2021 at 10:19 AM Thank you a Victor, that’s all anyone could hope for, most appreciated ~~ Belle