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First Night

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Oh, how they danced as the sun shimmered red,
it dipped far away as the stars upwards sped.
Still, they danced, leaving footprints on wet sand,
Sometimes straight or crisscrossing, everything grand.

Occasionally, they stopped, and in a hug, they kissed.
Or ran to some cave that was their secluded tryst.
Time passed fast, and they returned to their bridal suite.
Before retiring, they drank champagne and pastry sweet.

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/7/2025 2:59:00 PM

Victor, My Victor - so happy that you are giving me the bird again - seriously, I love seeing the bird on my pages. I saw you in my dreams after returning to PS. You were seated behind a desk, composing poetry on a computer and smiled widely and grandly when I walked, then you went to fetch something and didn't return. It was a happy and confusing dream. I loved reading the above poem because it is so you, the you who writes poems that bring me joy. Your pen stays true ... CayCay

Paige Hind

Date: 2/6/2025 8:57:00 PM

Like "leaving footprints on wet sand, Sometimes straight or crisscrossing" beautiful

Michael Tor

Date: 2/4/2025 10:32:00 PM

Such a wonderful time they had together does it get any better than that Victor? Thanks for writing enjoyed reading my friend, hope all is well...

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/3/2025 5:57:00 AM

Wow, Victor, this is so lovely. It’s my first poem to read after being off here a while. And it paint a dear scene! Missed you. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/3/2025 3:41:00 AM

Victor, a delightful poem, sweet and romantic.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/3/2025 3:06:00 AM

Forgetting the world ! This will be an unforgettable day in future Very nice

Ink Empress

Date: 2/2/2025 11:45:00 PM

Such a beautiful ambiance youv described in such an artistic manner! Love the flow and how youv painted imagery, and the picture youv used here is so fitting too for the poem. I especially love the lines "it dipped far away as the stars upwards sped. Still, they danced, leaving footprints on wet sand, Sometimes straight or crisscrossing, everything grand." How stunning!!! I can see through your well articulated lines! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always

Shambhavi ambasta

Date: 2/2/2025 10:22:00 PM

It's so lovely !! How beautifully you penned the moment . It's just....... amazing

Maria Williams

Date: 2/2/2025 1:36:00 AM

Dear Victor, a beautiful romantic one with lots of imagery. Just lovely...Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 2/1/2025 8:38:00 PM

Their first night sounds so pleasant and romantic. The location they chose adds to the joy of their auspicious union. Beautifully composed, dear Victor.

Tonye George

Date: 2/1/2025 12:16:00 PM

I can imagine the calm and love they have. Being watched by the sun, marked by the wet sand and cheered up with champagne. I'll be sure to use a white wine when I dance with my beloved as I do not like champagne.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2025 10:40:00 AM

This romance near the sea is sensational, dear Victor!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/1/2025 8:11:00 AM

Victor, this is such a delightful, descriptive piece! Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/31/2025 6:02:00 PM

Victor, your excellent poem captures unforgettable moments, dear to lovers' hearts. I enjoyed this beautiful love tale. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/31/2025 4:29:00 PM

Cute little moments to cherish always. An exquisite tale of fantasy and love, Your depiction of honeymoon love is truly touching, Victor.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2025 3:34:00 PM

A really sweet portrayal of honeymoon love, Victor.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2025 12:45:00 PM

Ahhh!!! The pastry/ies I could go for. I am a sweet lover. Thanks for sharing your passionate work. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/31/2025 12:39:00 PM

beautiful romance and imaginary, i love the sentiments here, two for one, one for two thanks poet

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/31/2025 10:29:00 AM

Victor, oh, Victor, long has been the wait to realize this moment of splendor ... OKAY, RETURN TO SERIOUS - - I have not felt lighthearted and playful in quite a long time which means our visit is truly memorable. Spontaneous, fulfilling moments are blessed rarities and I'm so glad we shared one. You Look Marvelous ... CayCAy