First Memory

When not yet two, I stood transfixed before a museum’s staged depiction
of a cougar killing a deer. Terror filled her eyes. Blood soaked her coat.
My mother says it took twenty minutes to pull me away from that scene!

in my memory
death clings like a cougar’s teeth
on its victim’s neck

July 9, 2020 for Line Gauthier's A Memory Poetry Contest
Prose part word count = 40
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 7:41 AM
I can picture what impression that image would've had on a tender mind at that age. Love how intricately you've described it Andrea. Congratulations on your win. I've been catching up on reading your poems now that I got some time after two weeks. Thanks for visiting my page. Blessings and love :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 1:30 PM
Yowsers! That is an impacting scene. Great write! Congratulations for your win. xomo
Agustin Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 1:06 AM
Congrats! So vividly written... God bless you.
Watt Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 10:39 PM
Wow, Andrea, you really dug deep into your memory banks for this. Maybe this explains why you like dark movies and shows! Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 12:17 AM
you got it, John. That fascination with the macabre must have begun in that moment.
Brul Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 8:31 PM
Wonderful Haibun dear Andrea. I vividly imagine such scene as if my own memory..Congratulations!!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 3:45 PM
Nicely penned my friend.
May Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 10:37 PM
A traumatic experience Andrea, That image is seared into the memory, Very nicely penned..
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Traumatizing events--even just the depiction of them--can stay with us forever. This is an exceptionally fine piece, Andrea! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 1:51 PM
My first ghastly memory was at a museum in SLC displaying the mummified remains of Native Americans. Then and there I determined to be cremated so the Christians could not get their hands on me! Best wishes for sweeter memories! Aloha! Rico
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Those scenes stay with you forever. Tom
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