Victor Buhagiar Poet Dizain

First Meeting

I never believed I would find such joy,
Beauty entered the lift, Cupid work hard,
Me poor but smart, duties of a bellboy,
Wrote a Valentine: Meet me, I'm Bernard!

Maybe we could saunter to some farmyard,
In fields so quiet, picnic on the grass,
We will talk long to learn who is this lass.
Surely she will get to know who I am.
I did not care I'm transparent like glass.
We’ll kiss, hug and have thrills, love is sweet jam.

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Sara Kendrick February 10, 2023 at 9:27 AM This one could be changed around a little and entered in the contest about my ideal date if it is still open. I enjoyed reading it. The form Dizain is what drew me in, but the content kept me here. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Valsa George January 16, 2022 at 1:12 AM Transparent as glass and handsome like a prince.... ! Who could turn down an offer to be with such a guy.... :) :) Relax and get well fast !

Angela Crabtree September 30, 2020 at 4:37 PM I really like this poem. Did they fall in love and stay together forever? I hope so. :)

Eve Roper September 25, 2020 at 5:08 PM Great poem, Victor, love is sweet jam. :)

Jennifer Proxenos September 24, 2020 at 6:59 AM Oh so cute Bellboy Bernard, how could she resist a young handsome man with such a sweet as jam invitation - loved this write. Hugs and Blessings Victor, Jennifer.

Joanna Daniel September 23, 2020 at 11:25 PM Lovely dizain, Victor:)

Judy Ball September 23, 2020 at 3:13 PM I loved this Victor. So cute and filled with good memories. Excellent. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2020 at 3:39 PM A different read then some of your others. Those first two lines of the second verse, I love!

M. L. Kiser September 22, 2020 at 12:58 PM Sweet indeed, this was a fun read, good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 9:40 AM - Sweet as jam and honey ... let your dreams fly ... good luck in the contest, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2020 at 8:52 AM what can i say?... you can charm any woman with your find ways...lovely poem, victor... huggs

Jan Allison September 21, 2020 at 6:38 AM aww what a sweet romantic poems ... dreams do come true though Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit September 21, 2020 at 4:36 AM Hope his dreams came true. A charming love story, Victor.

Tom Cunningham September 20, 2020 at 11:31 PM Nothing wrong with daydreams, they make you feel good. Tom

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 20, 2020 at 10:48 PM An excellent dizain that is pleasure to read. The wording is sublime, with a delightful romance and ending. Best wishes for the contest. :)