First Meeting

I never believed I would find such joy,
Beauty entered the lift, Cupid work hard,
Me poor but smart, duties of a bellboy,
Wrote a Valentine: Meet me, I'm Bernard!

Maybe we could saunter to some farmyard,
In fields so quiet, picnic on the grass,
We will talk long to learn who is this lass.
Surely she will get to know who I am.
I did not care I'm transparent like glass.
We’ll kiss, hug and have thrills, love is sweet jam.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 2/10/2023 9:27:00 AM
This one could be changed around a little and entered in the contest about my ideal date if it is still open. I enjoyed reading it. The form Dizain is what drew me in, but the content kept me here. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/16/2022 1:12:00 AM
Transparent as glass and handsome like a prince.... ! Who could turn down an offer to be with such a guy.... :) :) Relax and get well fast !
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Date: 9/30/2020 4:37:00 PM
I really like this poem. Did they fall in love and stay together forever? I hope so. :)
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Date: 9/25/2020 5:08:00 PM
Great poem, Victor, love is sweet jam. :)
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Date: 9/24/2020 6:59:00 AM
Oh so cute Bellboy Bernard, how could she resist a young handsome man with such a sweet as jam invitation - loved this write. Hugs and Blessings Victor, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/23/2020 11:25:00 PM
Lovely dizain, Victor:)
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Date: 9/23/2020 3:13:00 PM
I loved this Victor. So cute and filled with good memories. Excellent. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
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Date: 9/22/2020 3:39:00 PM
A different read then some of your others. Those first two lines of the second verse, I love!
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Date: 9/22/2020 12:58:00 PM
Sweet indeed, this was a fun read, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/21/2020 9:40:00 AM
- Sweet as jam and honey ... let your dreams fly ... good luck in the contest, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2020 8:52:00 AM
what can i say?... you can charm any woman with your find ways...lovely poem, victor... huggs
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Date: 9/21/2020 6:38:00 AM
aww what a sweet romantic poems ... dreams do come true though Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2020 4:36:00 AM
Hope his dreams came true. A charming love story, Victor.
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Date: 9/20/2020 11:31:00 PM
Nothing wrong with daydreams, they make you feel good. Tom
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:48:00 PM
An excellent dizain that is pleasure to read. The wording is sublime, with a delightful romance and ending. Best wishes for the contest. :)
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