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First Meeting

I never believed I would find such joy, Beauty entered the lift, Cupid work hard, Me poor but smart, duties of a bellboy, Wrote a Valentine: Meet me, I'm Bernard! Maybe we could saunter to some farmyard, In fields so quiet, picnic on the grass, We will talk long to learn who is this lass. Surely she will get to know who I am. I did not care I'm transparent like glass. We’ll kiss, hug and have thrills, love is sweet jam.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2023 9:27:00 AM

This one could be changed around a little and entered in the contest about my ideal date if it is still open. I enjoyed reading it. The form Dizain is what drew me in, but the content kept me here. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 1/16/2022 1:12:00 AM

Transparent as glass and handsome like a prince.... ! Who could turn down an offer to be with such a guy.... :) :) Relax and get well fast !

Angela Crabtree

Date: 9/30/2020 4:37:00 PM

I really like this poem. Did they fall in love and stay together forever? I hope so. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/25/2020 5:08:00 PM

Great poem, Victor, love is sweet jam. :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2020 6:59:00 AM

Oh so cute Bellboy Bernard, how could she resist a young handsome man with such a sweet as jam invitation - loved this write. Hugs and Blessings Victor, Jennifer.