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Thematic Categories: allegory, confusion, destiny, emotions, fate, lost love, and symbolism.

First Love’s Indelible Memory Pure Deep in my memory remains a pure vision of a first love, long-forgotten—now conjured up as a present-day image. This rare, soulful reflection harkens back to another time long ago to a period of discovery and youthful innocence. The slow and perpetual ravages of time—dim and affect now these memories except those replete with passion and emotion. Other images also enter my mind of things that might have been, and of things that could have been, but in the end—never were. Perhaps like many others, very seldom do I ever dwell on such memories buried deeply in my mind and spiritual consciousness. With such memories buried so deeply, also come those moments of inexplicable pain, confusion, and an aching sense of real loss. But, alas, as I awaken from this image-laden daydream of the past, I realize the different path and direction I took was the right one. If there be a lesson to all of this, it is to always know yourself, and to never be afraid of what love’s pain my bring your way in life. You can overcome it especially when you realize the role that fate and destiny play in this whole process as you mature and move on. The past ghosts of love’s pain are just that, they lie in the past, and in the past as they should remain as you seek real true love in your life. Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved December 3, 2018 (Couplet)

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Date: 12/7/2018 7:40:00 AM
My great friend, these exceptional and meaningful couplets on life, fate, living and past hopes, dreams, sorrows, blessings and etc. are so inspirational to this old poet that relates so well to this wondrously creative and brilliant poem.. A fav, this struck deep into my poetic soul.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 12/7/2018 2:23:00 PM
Hello Robert!! A great friend you are too!! I am very pleased that you liked this deeply soul-searching couplet of mine. This type of poem is outside the normal standard fare for Poetry Soup. And it is quite nice that you gave it a read and a FAVE too!! This one will definitely appear in my next book of poetry which I hope to have released by April-May 2019 by my publisher. (I will keep you posted on this too!!) Have a great weekend!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Book: Shattered Sighs