First Love

Summer days are gone
No  kissing in the sun
Time is on the run
autumn has begun

Close your eyes remember me
Close your eyes what do you see
You and me just like it used to be

Words that were unspoken
Hearts the became broken
Sun refusing to shine
Now no longer mine

Close your eyes remember me
Close your eyes what do you see
You and me not like it used to be

Time faded into the past
Love that did not last
No kissing in the sun
Those days are gone.

28/10/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Stebbings Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 6:12 AM
I like this, Phyllis. Expressive lyrical piece. Barry.
Babcock Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Thanks Barry for your comment. love phyl
James Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Wonderful write!
Babcock Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Thanks James for your comment. love phyl
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Never dream of never Phyllis, the best may be just ahead...well done
Babcock Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 10:35 PM
thanks for your comment on my song lyrics. Yes we should never say never it is always good to dream. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:10 PM
- A little sad, I hope the romance will blossoms when the spring comes - Lovely written, dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Thanks for the comment Anne Lise. We are hitting some beautiful weather at the moment. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
Bocsa Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Wonderful, touching and so lyrical Like an inner song almost mythical.
Babcock Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thank you for your comment on my lyrics. love phyl
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