First Love

FIRST LOVE

              Our glances adored each other
              as we chanced to meet.
              First love at first sight just in teen.
              He never spoke to me.
              I got no opportunity to interact.

             On my study leave of six months,
             I watched him from far balcony.
             We wandered in the park keeping distance.
             Neither he nor I opened mouth.
             Yet our silent world was romantic.
             Seed of love was sowed and sprouted in mind.
             Hard root pierced heart in pain and pleasure.
             Stem of emotion spread pair of passionate leaves.

             On last eve of my departure
             I was forlorn to loiter in the park on dusty dusk
             He was alone to walk on side-road.

           On sudden boost with thrashing momentum
           he rushed and stood close to me.
           I was not shy but looked direct at his eyes
            with ardent ardor and intense expectation.

               He could not utter a single syllable.


     10/06/16  
                   First Love Contest by Frank Herrera
                  judged on 10/07/16
                                                               Second place

  Second place only Contest III by Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 8:17 AM
A lovely story, Anisha. First loves are never forgotten. I love the part where you keep your virtue pure. In this country that relationship would be a teenage pregnancy.
Dutta Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Indian Culture is different. But the happening was fifty years back. Now Culture is westernized.
Daniel Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Very nicely written, Anisha:) hope you had a happy ending:) congratulations on your win:)
Dambani Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Cute
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