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First Love

First Love

Her eyes showed me a way,
Her unique smile let my tears go away,
Her Beautiful face made me to say,
Is this Love, or what???

Started to have feeling of love,
Started to behave nicely and different,
Started to smile when there was no reason to smile,
Still, Is this Love, or what??

Tried to approach her, but felt belittled, lowly, shy,
Tried to ask her for date, but felt afraid, scared, shocked,
Tried to express my love, felt would be rejected, hurt, unheard,
Well still, Is this love, or what?

I can fix anything, why not this thing,
I can talk to any girl, why not this girl,
I can really convince anyone, why not this one,
Came before many girl, why not this girl.

Do please not tell me its just nothing,
Do tell me how to do something about this thing...Love,
Do tell me anything about this thing…Love,
Will there be rejection or appreciation??????????

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/28/2013 5:46:00 PM Balbir, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA** Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 4/16/2013 5:14:00 PM Balbir :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT Login to Reply B S Sky Date: 4/16/2013 6:43:00 PM Hello Skat, Thanks for the warm welcome. I will surely do as what you have mentioned. Really loved the way you inspired me. Thanks a lot for that. I am enjoying my stay in PoetrySoup and I think its the best in the net. Kind Regards.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/16/2013 1:17:00 PM Balbir, sweet written. - Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with writing, reading and comments here with us. - Wish you all the best. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply B S Sky Date: 4/16/2013 1:41:00 PM Hello Anne, Thanks for your politeness that bought happiness to me. I am really enjoying my journey of poetry. I hope you are to happy being on Poetry Soup. Kind Regards.

Ayesha Karim Date: 4/10/2013 8:50:00 AM I liked your poem. Nobody wants to be rejected and I would tell her how you feel about her. You will never know how she'll react if you never tell her you love her. Props on the quality of your poem Login to Reply B S Sky Date: 4/10/2013 2:05:00 PM Hello Ayesha, Thanks for the motivation. Kind Regards.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/9/2013 8:50:00 PM This is very nice Balbir, the way she shadowed you away, came into my deep imagery. I'm hoping she will go and be all for the appreciation, enjoyed your poem..Linda Login to Reply B S Sky Date: 4/10/2013 12:35:00 AM Thanks for your nice comment Linda, Have a nice day.