First Love

Woe, unto this heart of men
This mortal soul, I fear is weak
I question God, is this sin?
Bold I was, now humbled and meek

Forsaken by the breath of life
My lungs betray my need to breathe
My heart is pierced by an unseen knife
A foe, my mind cannot perceive

My dreams held captive by enchanted smiles
My hunger, a thing of the past
My sleep now stolen by these wicked trials
A torment, that's unsurpassed

What curse is this that leaves me maim,
And renders my body weak?
Does this demon have a name,
That paints my future bleak?

Alas, this wound will never heal
It festers within a crippled soul
'Tis love that's robbed me of my will
For I no longer have control
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Wow, This one is deep, Larry. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Have a great weekend. Ralph
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Wow. A wonderful read, especially since I can most certainly relate.. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
Onclaud Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 7:19 AM
the angst gritting each line makes this piece so beautiful to read, larry... :) huggs, nette
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