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First Love

A kiss, A smile, A unique bliss, All the while, Every word, Every hug, Strucks a chord, In my chest with a tug, He makes my world shine, And it gives me great pride, To know that he is mine, It's a fact I can't hide, He's my knight who rides gallantly, He's fine, But most importantly, He's all mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2010 12:05:00 AM
Yeah, I agree with the Doc, also like the rhythm and rhyme scheme in this. Cheers!
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Date: 4/15/2010 8:33:00 PM
A fine romantic poem.
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